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Put your poems here
He sits in the dungeon
Feeling alone
He sits on that chair, like a king on his throne
His eyes a deep red
his hair a long silked black
he wears a red suit
now who could be that?
(yea, I know its not that good, it just popped into my mind)
Feeling alone
He sits on that chair, like a king on his throne
His eyes a deep red
his hair a long silked black
he wears a red suit
now who could be that?
(yea, I know its not that good, it just popped into my mind)
MajinKitty230- Member
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Joined : 2009-03-08
Re: Put your poems here
i wrote a song (songs are poems)
I'll post it =D
1st Verse
We know Jesus as a Savior
But for a time I wasn't sure
Then I heard a preacher say, "Just put your trust in him"
And from then I was a fish to a lure
That next Sunday I had this feeling
Like a voice speaking to me
I knelt down on one knee
and now I gladly See
Chorus
He saved my soul
He gave me life
All of which he gave to me
To live with him in eternal life
Now I shout with glee!
Since that day he saved me from sin
Now I'm born again!
2nd Verse
I used to be that beggar
Knowing nothing of his grace
But after that blessed Sunday
Hearing someone talk to me
I found my self hittin' the alter
I finally won the race
Chorus
Now I'm born again!
Solo
Bridge
When you're feeling down and out
On the brink of giving in
Just call on his dear name
Let Jesus free you from sin!
Chorus (two more times)
I know but this is the first song I actually wrote and finished and I really want to share it!
I'll post it =D
1st Verse
We know Jesus as a Savior
But for a time I wasn't sure
Then I heard a preacher say, "Just put your trust in him"
And from then I was a fish to a lure
That next Sunday I had this feeling
Like a voice speaking to me
I knelt down on one knee
and now I gladly See
Chorus
He saved my soul
He gave me life
All of which he gave to me
To live with him in eternal life
Now I shout with glee!
Since that day he saved me from sin
Now I'm born again!
2nd Verse
I used to be that beggar
Knowing nothing of his grace
But after that blessed Sunday
Hearing someone talk to me
I found my self hittin' the alter
I finally won the race
Chorus
Now I'm born again!
Solo
Bridge
When you're feeling down and out
On the brink of giving in
Just call on his dear name
Let Jesus free you from sin!
Chorus (two more times)
I know but this is the first song I actually wrote and finished and I really want to share it!
Funky Road- Retired Staff
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Joined : 2009-02-28
Re: Put your poems here
You know what bothers me
Those artsy "deep" poems
They just cut off
sentences at the weirdest spots,
and don't rhyme,
And rarely have rhythm.
Just going on about some,
deep message or something.
What the
Cocks,
I don't know how to poetry.
Those artsy "deep" poems
They just cut off
sentences at the weirdest spots,
and don't rhyme,
And rarely have rhythm.
Just going on about some,
deep message or something.
What the
Cocks,
I don't know how to poetry.
Youkoi- Member
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Joined : 2009-06-07
Re: Put your poems here
I write a haiku
To this post of poetry
In hopes of success
Well, I write one more!
Why, one might ask, another?
Haiku: addicting
As I continue
You read and count syllables
But all are correct
Leekspin dot com, ha
Six minutes, I am there for
Even still, it plays
Alas, I must stop
For others must also write
And add their poems
-These haikus were from
An anonymous poet
Not really. From, Tal
To this post of poetry
In hopes of success
Well, I write one more!
Why, one might ask, another?
Haiku: addicting
As I continue
You read and count syllables
But all are correct
Leekspin dot com, ha
Six minutes, I am there for
Even still, it plays
Alas, I must stop
For others must also write
And add their poems
-These haikus were from
An anonymous poet
Not really. From, Tal
Tal- Administrator
- Post Count : 1861
Joined : 2009-01-19
Re: Put your poems here
"Masquerade"
A masquerade, a masquerade,
a masquerade this was!
The crowd, The cause,
to contribute with applause!
Join the parade, Join the parade,
all shall enter the fray!
They shout, they sang: "hip hip hooray!"
"Let us cling together, Let us seize the day!"
All a charade, all a charade,
many had stories to tell.
Save for one, constrained to the cell.
but no one cared for the guy that fell.
Each Betrayed, each betrayed,
behind masks none need to pause.
Given freedom, they bare their claws,
stabbing each other to expose their flaws.
We're dismayed, we're dismayed,
the gathered masses say.
"This was my time, this was the way!"
"All was suppose to be in play!"
Afraid, afraid,
his words rang like a bell.
The outcast who suffered, told all from his jail,
he was alone and truly in hell.
A masquerade, a masquerade,
a masquerade this was!
The crowd, The cause,
to contribute with applause!
Join the parade, Join the parade,
all shall enter the fray!
They shout, they sang: "hip hip hooray!"
"Let us cling together, Let us seize the day!"
All a charade, all a charade,
many had stories to tell.
Save for one, constrained to the cell.
but no one cared for the guy that fell.
Each Betrayed, each betrayed,
behind masks none need to pause.
Given freedom, they bare their claws,
stabbing each other to expose their flaws.
We're dismayed, we're dismayed,
the gathered masses say.
"This was my time, this was the way!"
"All was suppose to be in play!"
Afraid, afraid,
his words rang like a bell.
The outcast who suffered, told all from his jail,
he was alone and truly in hell.
Re: Put your poems here
My contribution
Has something to do with retribution
Because that rhymes
I like limes
Has something to do with retribution
Because that rhymes
I like limes
Sub- WOA Ally
- Post Count : 332
Joined : 2009-02-14
Re: Put your poems here
*ahem*
A Haiku
Klonoa. Wahoo.
Furries, so fluffy. Epic.
This is a haiku.
(Yes, this was actually in proper Haiku format. Exact number of syllables.)
A Haiku
Klonoa. Wahoo.
Furries, so fluffy. Epic.
This is a haiku.
(Yes, this was actually in proper Haiku format. Exact number of syllables.)
I lol'dMy contribution
Has something to do with retribution
Because that rhymes
I like limes
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