i need some comments on this

can you read the text on this? lol and what do you think it needs or is it good?

its for verryyyyyy something importantttt so i need to make sure its awesome D:

guys guys, im saying this to all gfx makers (looking at shiki). there is more to making a sig than just throwing in a random C4D as a background! A C4D is for EMPHASIS or EFFECT, NOT a background.

But yeah, i can't see the text too well, try an outer yellow glow.

I can't read it at all. That might be because I just woke up lol.
Nevertheless try not to keep the text the same or almost the same to the background. Try to add drop shadows, outer glows, etc. To give your text more depth and shape.

I agree with everything in both the previous posts.
Also you need to use moar interesting fonts, but it's still pretty good.

what it NEEDS is moar cowbell!

cowbell?

lol well ill se what i can do