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Post by Chu on Wed Apr 04, 2012 10:48 pm

so i made a signature for the first time in like forever



I'm meh about it, it could improve alot

any suggestions?
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Re: BRS signature

Post by Grimblade on Thu Apr 05, 2012 2:17 am

Looks nice. :3 Did you make it from scratch?
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Re: BRS signature

Post by BA on Thu Apr 05, 2012 4:40 am

Looks clean and nice, the colors are good, however the way the signature was made works against it being continually interesting to the eye.

The render has a bit of a tendency to blend into the rest of the signature. Working on your lighting and darkening as well as your sharping and blurring will help make your focal point stand out more. The above mentioned helps to add depth too, which I think is sorely missing from this piece.
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Re: BRS signature

Post by Chu on Thu Apr 05, 2012 4:13 pm

okay so I fixed it up a bit



added a c4d and fixed the lighting a bit

i think it looks better <3
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Re: BRS signature

Post by BA on Fri Apr 06, 2012 6:08 am

A step in the right direction. The depth is coming along and it's more interesting to view.

Try playing with the C4D some more; with a pinch of blur, darken, and perhaps some sharpen to the render, the C4D won't be robbing as much focus away from the render itself as well as distorting the flow.

When defining your focal point, the first thing you want them to see is obviously the thing your trying to point out. Everything else is used to draw the viewer into the signature and onto your focal point as well as to complement that point, which in this case is the render.
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Re: BRS signature

Post by REN on Sat Apr 07, 2012 7:39 pm

What a coincidence my dear BA! That's what I told Pikagirl at the chat when she just posted her signature (though you were more precise)
I agree that the 2nd version looks better, IMO the left side shouldn't be very dark since the light at the center looks strong (look at the lighting on her weapon and on her body, they contrast).
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Re: BRS signature

Post by Tal on Sat Apr 07, 2012 11:00 pm

I have absolutely no clue what this is but it's pretty neat.
Good job, I say.
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