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Post by Funky Road on Sat Aug 13, 2011 3:32 pm

Well here's a song I wrote. Finished it in one day, and now I just gotta work on the tune
The song is in Half-Step Down tuning in the key of Gb (since it's half step down)

I already have the first two chords I want to use but I'll post the whole finished project later once it does get finished!

[1st Verse]
I see a beautiful smile
Lookin’ over at me
Never felt a love
That I could clearly see
I’ve never thought
That love at first sight
Would mean so much to me

[Instrumental Break]

[2nd Verse]
Music’s been my love
But that seems to have changed
Since the day I met you
A change of pace was made
Now I’m writing songs for you girl
This I know is true

[Chorus]
Just a look in your eyes
Takes my breath away
I promise to hold you
‘Til the end of the way
No one else can replace your love
I thank God for his blessings
Because he blessed me with you

[3rd Verse]
Would you believe me
If I’d said that you were the one
Would you believe me
If I’d said that I’d love you
Til my days are done
I don’t feel so alone now
When you are around

[Chorus]

[Bridge]
Don’t give up on hope now
We can make it through
I’ll give you the best I can
With all of my love too

[Guitar Solo]

[Chorus 2x]

[Ending]
Oh I love you babe
‘Cause God blessed me with you
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Post by BA on Sun Aug 14, 2011 1:30 am

Excellent, those were pretty deep lyrics, Funky.
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Post by Funky Road on Sun Aug 14, 2011 3:39 pm

thanks, when it comes to thinking of a love song, I try to make it deep and from the heart as much as possible. I don't wanna do what most artists today do where they just slap stuff together so they can please the audience.
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Post by Kurono on Mon Aug 15, 2011 6:42 pm

i love it, mind if i use it? lol
its a really good song and it has a lot of deep feelings.
it connects to the heart
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Post by Sub on Wed Aug 17, 2011 4:09 am

How do I put this without sounding like a complete ass...hmmm...that's a really hard question.

It doesn't suck, but it just feels like it's too...eh...generic? Not exactly the word I'm looking for but whatever. And I'm not bashing on your writing skills, it's just that if there's any kind of poem or song that I hate more than anything, it's the "I love you because." That's just me. I can tell it comes from the heart and there are a lot of people this stuff appeals to, but I'm really not one of them. It's not like I hate all romantic lyrics or poetry, because I've written some romantic poetry. It just has no subtlety to it.

So all in all, I don't like it, but I can see the meaning in it and I could see why people would like it. It's just not the kind of thing that appeals to me. But whatever you do, keep on truckin. If you love what you do, do it as much as you possibly can, and do it well. Peace.
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Post by Funky Road on Wed Aug 17, 2011 7:18 am

Sub, I love your honesty, and I really love the way you presented it. I respect your opinion and I thank you for it as well.


But also, I've been revising my song a bit too so that isn't the finished lyric. Going back in and changing or adding a few peices to make it sound better even when saying it in poetical form.
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