My creative writing class forced me to write a new song

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My creative writing class forced me to write a new song

Post by Blood2Bleed on Sat Aug 13, 2011 12:45 am

well, not really. we were given words that we had to use and idk why but i just had to write a song with them. It was supposed to have a Rise Against feel to it but the lines are too long.. so now it seems like more of a rap but whatever bounce bounce i put a * thingy next to the words i was given

So whether (spelling is for squares) or not it's good, here it is.

There's so much wrong with the world*
I watch with my fingers tightly curled
It seems like I'm the only one*
Who feels something needs to be done
Unable to comprehend a cause*
No time to rest* or pause
We are all on a downhill slope
All we can do is try to cope*

Elective amnesia is the general metality*
Living on the verge of infinate fatalities
Not a shimmer* of light, genuine* darkness
right now the situation looks hopeless
How all we do is intertwined*,
That fact seems to slip your mind
We're poised to fall off the deep end
Hope you can swim, if not, the end.

so yeah, not too awesome. but i haven't written anything in about 2 years so give me a break Awesome Face
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Post by Shadowlight on Sat Aug 13, 2011 12:47 am

I have song Ideas Myself, I might post them up sometime so keep an eye out for them
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Post by BA on Sat Aug 13, 2011 12:51 am

Essentially, songs are just poems.

I like it, did you also compose a melody with this or is it just the lyrics?
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Post by Blood2Bleed on Sat Aug 13, 2011 2:01 am

BA wrote:Essentially, songs are just poems.

I like it, did you also compose a melody with this or is it just the lyrics?

yes, indeed they are. i'm working on a chord progression right now. then i'll get to work on a melody.
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Post by Grimblade on Sat Aug 13, 2011 9:13 am

I like the lyrics! You should post the actual song when you're done if you're able to. (Dunno if your school has the softwarez to do it)
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Post by Funky Road on Sat Aug 13, 2011 3:28 pm

I finished a song yesterday too. I'm thinking about posting it
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Post by Kurono on Mon Aug 15, 2011 6:39 pm

good poem bro, hope you make it into a song
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