My creative writing class forced me to write a new song
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My creative writing class forced me to write a new song
well, not really. we were given words that we had to use and idk why but i just had to write a song with them. It was supposed to have a Rise Against feel to it but the lines are too long.. so now it seems like more of a rap but whatever i put a * thingy next to the words i was given
So whether (spelling is for squares) or not it's good, here it is.
There's so much wrong with the world*
I watch with my fingers tightly curled
It seems like I'm the only one*
Who feels something needs to be done
Unable to comprehend a cause*
No time to rest* or pause
We are all on a downhill slope
All we can do is try to cope*
Elective amnesia is the general metality*
Living on the verge of infinate fatalities
Not a shimmer* of light, genuine* darkness
right now the situation looks hopeless
How all we do is intertwined*,
That fact seems to slip your mind
We're poised to fall off the deep end
Hope you can swim, if not, the end.
so yeah, not too awesome. but i haven't written anything in about 2 years so give me a break
So whether (spelling is for squares) or not it's good, here it is.
There's so much wrong with the world*
I watch with my fingers tightly curled
It seems like I'm the only one*
Who feels something needs to be done
Unable to comprehend a cause*
No time to rest* or pause
We are all on a downhill slope
All we can do is try to cope*
Elective amnesia is the general metality*
Living on the verge of infinate fatalities
Not a shimmer* of light, genuine* darkness
right now the situation looks hopeless
How all we do is intertwined*,
That fact seems to slip your mind
We're poised to fall off the deep end
Hope you can swim, if not, the end.
so yeah, not too awesome. but i haven't written anything in about 2 years so give me a break
Blood2Bleed- Member
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Re: My creative writing class forced me to write a new song
I have song Ideas Myself, I might post them up sometime so keep an eye out for them
Shadowlight- Member
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Re: My creative writing class forced me to write a new song
Essentially, songs are just poems.
I like it, did you also compose a melody with this or is it just the lyrics?
I like it, did you also compose a melody with this or is it just the lyrics?
Re: My creative writing class forced me to write a new song
BA wrote:Essentially, songs are just poems.
I like it, did you also compose a melody with this or is it just the lyrics?
yes, indeed they are. i'm working on a chord progression right now. then i'll get to work on a melody.
Blood2Bleed- Member
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Re: My creative writing class forced me to write a new song
I like the lyrics! You should post the actual song when you're done if you're able to. (Dunno if your school has the softwarez to do it)
Re: My creative writing class forced me to write a new song
I finished a song yesterday too. I'm thinking about posting it
Funky Road- Retired Staff
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Re: My creative writing class forced me to write a new song
good poem bro, hope you make it into a song
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